Fanficwriter23131
man that was so sudden and dark, so far there hasn't even been a hint of mc having that killer instinct. Besides, he couldn't walk on a cloud if he had to, a pure heart isn't just thinking about perverted things....
this twist seems too forced, the mc was kind of lazy and useless but he wasn't evil in nature.
totally out of character
gone south so fast, i don't see the future in this.
I didn't like the protagonist is very out of character
Dude Oozaru transformation only happens when there's a Full Moon.
Too dark for me, can you please make MC regret his deed? Later learn from this, to not repeat it again.
por esto parece black goku XD?
No wonder you stopped writing it. You abandoned this after raeping this plot and didn't know where to go next. :/
Ty
I want him to leet roshu again and get beaten through pure martial arts skill
