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Comments of chapter undefined of Zenin's Last Plan:

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Daoist7EZpg5
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I dont like to feel like I’m criticising for no reason, especially since i like this fanfic, but why did he “grit his teeth in pain” from the grass blades if his attacks barely do any damage to the MC, plus wasn’t he tortured for years by his sister so his sense of pain became dull. I was just wondering.

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More of writing thing, I wanted to make the battlemore engaging, and if I made it where Mute doesn’t react to the attack at all, it’ll make the attack from Kitla seem pointless to write in

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killer_cruel
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tnx

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Daoist961469
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I don't think it was a smart decision to ally with Kenjaku, you already saw what happened with Geto, it's better that you stop being edgy and go with the good guys.

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