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Comments of chapter undefined of MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.

Inkybear
InkybearLv12Inkybear

Bad grammar and poor spelling errors. Tsk tsk tsk

AWESOME_01
AWESOME_01Lv4AWESOME_01

Started reading again when you said it gets better, but working for others is not my kind of thing. You could have made him not join any guild at least if you didn't want him to make a guild, working on other's whims is just not to my liking. So sorry and Good luck going forward 👍🏻

Pillow_Melt
Pillow_MeltLv10Pillow_Melt

Well, he might think he was walking the path of a slaver but he's not. He was still a slave (PREMIUM SLAVE), and he join a guild made by the most wanted criminal. And people like him takes whatever advantage they can take to survive in underworld. So he just repeat the mistake he made in his life.

InfiniteRaider
InfiniteRaiderLv15InfiniteRaider

I like the concept of the book so far but the grammar is just killing me. Please fix some of the sentences in the future, thank you!

Champsing
ChampsingAuthorChampsing

Will release the bonus chapter after some time today. [img=faceslap]slow

LikeableKiwi
LikeableKiwiLv3LikeableKiwi

having a clan can allow him to sabotage anyone who attacks his dungeon y'know.

Sidis
SidisLv15Sidis

nice chapter

Topsmangas
TopsmangasLv13Topsmangas

Cria uma guilda poder ajudar muito,ele pensa demais em ser o melhor,ser o melhor e muito trabalhoso, em disso só deixe pensa em ser 3 ou 4 melhor do jogo assim e mesmo pressão, fora que o mundo e grande nem todo mundo e igual tem muitas boas por aí .tente fazer ele acha uns 10 a 15 pessoas assim da uma guilda pequena,mais confiável,e só ideia idiota não tenho talento pra isso ,mais estou gostando muito do romance,e quero ver o tanto que ele vai crescer