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Comments of chapter undefined of The King of Spades

The King of Spades

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TheAtheist
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Darius and Jericho acting somewhat mature is understandable. but if you're trying to make fred act his age, I think it still needs a little work, he is still too mature. still, thanks for the chapter.

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JRP
JRPAuthorJRP

I know right? But it's hard trying to have Fred act younger when he's constantly sorrounded by mature people. at this point, him acting mature because his adapting to them would be more believable anyway... THANKS FOR READING THE CHAPTER!

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