Hassy_101
Your synopsis is super confusing. You have random people talking that don't really give up any necessary information in the first chapter instead of introducing your main characters well and I was just thinking easy on the exclamation marks. Nevertheless, I've yet to read a contract marriage book... So I will give it a shot. Onward
No no, I'm very straight forward. I say what I like and what not. Sometimes people get upset so I just stop there, because it's not my intent to upset anyone. I don't think you did a bad job. Just needs some tweaks. I wouldn't have commented at all if I wasn't interested. If you don't mind, I'll keep going then😅
Hassy_101:Oh mine... of course, I'm completely fine with it. I'm just sighing because I did a bad job. Don't see it as anything. I tend to use 'sigh' a lot these days, so that's why. It's no big deal, really. You haven't critiqued the book yet and I'm actually waiting for that. Don't misunderstand, please 🙏