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Comments of chapter undefined of Celestial Elves' Survival Game

SpcBrokaw
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since this whole novel was deleted and rewritten, is this book going to be in first person view through the whole thing from now on? if so I'm getting rid of it. I can't stand first person novels.

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Tims232
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I waited until there were over a hundred chapters before I decided to read this again. I'm not saying it won't get better farther in, but so far I liked the original version better. Domestic abuse is always disturbing and it's not nearly as interesting as a time traveler with an evil twin from another world/dimension. Also, if giving the main character too much knowledge in advance made things too easy for him in your opinion you could have just made his memories a little more vague and fuzzy without losing the evil doppelganger and the time traveling aspect.

Tims232
Tims232Lv15Tims232

Why are all the other chapters gone?