Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

You still haven’t explained why you felt the need to add Bradley.

I don't think it'll happen, but I really want Kaku to get recruited to the Straw-hats

Gracias por el capítulo, solo tengo una duda ya que el merry no puede navegar por el nuevo mundo sin sufrir daños importantes, has pensado en darle a merry una fruta del diablo, una zoan mitológica como la fruta de la tortuga negra para que pueda seguir navegando o una mitológica como la hito-hito no mi versión elfo, angel, driade, etc para darle un cuerpo humano y así ser como pato del baron redfield que originalmente era una pluma, o si quieres conservar a merry como un barco darle entonces una avatar independiente que mientras más se fortalezca retroalimente al barco haciéndolo más fuerte para que pueda acompañar a los sombreros de paja en sus aventuras

Yes, at least your One Piece story is still far, far, far better than most One Piece fanfiction out there. Even when there's a harem, the story isn't as wild as most of the "lovers of the lower parts of humanity" fanfic writers out there. The story changes are also quite good. As for the power changes, it's not as crazy as the ones out there, I mean they still compete with big characters and are still inferior to superpowered characters despite some shortcomings... In essence, personally, of all the ONE PIECE fanfiction stories I've read, your fanfiction is the best so far. Thank you Author 👍

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

hojala le des nuevas traformaciones o alteraciones a luffy quinta marcha

tftc

nice chapter thx for writing it

[img=recommend] Thank you for the chapter⭐⭐⭐☁️☁️ [img=recommend].