Fallen_Crown
Your killing too many named characters while in real one piece Luffy didn’t kill,even If he could.....I wanted all those techniques I suggested.....but I don’t want people like Kuro,Arlong,Choo,Krieg,Nezumi etc.to die but you could have just handed them over to Smoker in logue town....Also your showing off too much in East Blue and Aramaki is too much and too early in the story plus too many OC's as well as power difference or difference in ability.....Also the real reason is I lost intetest in the fic after reading One Piece Dream of Immortality....while the fic is making me anxious that FMC will get too strong/Unkillable(Cause of Healing Factor) during the Post-TimeSkip but otherwise I love It,meaning everything about that fic while I liked the beginning of this story but gradually I'm losing interest,Sorry about that Author-nim,but You should keep continuing maybe I'll like It again in the future.