Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

It’s so annoying that he gets literally everyone that he comes across to join his crew.

you never actually describe what happened to morgan. you just write luffy telling him to die then nothing. i like this story but the last couple chapters have been a little lacking in quality. not flaming.

When he gets to water 7 there will be so many people in the group that you won't even know what to write for each one and it will turn into a mess if you get there.

Honestly I'm liking the route this crew is taking, I see a crew like Xebec, the official crew with Yonko or Admiral potential and the weaker ones with Vice Admiral potential. I liked that, I think I would do the same. After all let's face it guys, he is going to defeat not only the Navy but also the World Government, Who knows how many Admiral and Yonko level people have hidden in Marijoe, he will need a strong crew and not only that but also a fleet like the Original Luffy did.

Thanks for the chapter

oc sucks, especially in op fics

Having a big crew is kinda interesting Maybe have something like the division commanders of white beard later on

falou de defeitos, mais esqueceu da piada sem graça do maeio

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍👍👍

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thx for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

I thank you for the chapter.

Merci pour le chapitre !