B_Mitchylle
why bother with the snake , a human can easily go 1 day without eating , he even said she can walk out and the only thing stopping her is rain ... Also he sure is stupid going to sleep and doing nothing at all for hours about the wound , I guess he was tired of living huh Idk I hoped for more depth but the story so far is kinda lacking , I mean it's not that bad but a bit of logic ruins it all , that's what I mean by no depth