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Seriously, the romance was to fast and it doesn't really match lumine's personality. This kind of attitude seems like she's just searching for her brother casually, it doesn't match the scenario of losing your brother from an unknown god and waking up. She would have been more focused on trying to look for her brother and wouldn't entertain romance until she finds him and would feel guilty of she does so. For an actual romance to happen it would need more time, special moments and life and death battles for her to realize that she likes a person. This fic is focusing on romance way too much and way too early and can quickly turn into a trash fic, you're missing a lot of here
that's crazy, but now that he is here...is this truly what he wanted? will being here make him happy like that person inside his mind told him, enjoy this life? he always wanted his mom to look at him and give him some acknowledgement, but he crumbled and now started a new. but it was handed to him with perks...he has the girl that loves him but will his past life affect this new one like how it is right now? (just some surface thoughts that came to mind about things so far, can't wait for more story tho)