Comments of chapter undefined of First Demonic Dragon
First Demonic Dragon
AnathaShesha
Chapter comments12
listen man don't put down the story like that it's got great world building great character development I love the family Dynamic that you've built for them these wholesome chapters like this make me smile and laugh and cry and you put so much emotion and feeling behind this don't sell yourself short the book is great these chapters like this bring so much to the story I'd be perfectly fine if there were a hundred more of them keep it going man no worries
In my personal opinion these chapters are some of my favorite because it brings life to the character. It isn’t just some guy who’s out looking for women left and right to just forget about them two chapters later or just constant training with no end in sight. You’ve given life to your characters and your novel. You make it enjoyable to read. You make it easier to relate and love the characters. What would be the point of reading 100 chapters straight or training and fighting just to find out that the MC is still “weak”? You’ve made an overpowered MC who still shows valid reasons for being strong and getting stronger other than he just wants to. You’ve done an amazing job man and I hope you keep at it
bro go to my account if you doubt me xD im max lvl almost 1.9k hours reading....ive read way to much on here. you have written a truly unique story. every girl has her own story and is fleshed out they feel like individuals. his family actually helps him and gives him proper thoughts while understanding hes basically still a kid. these kind of chapters are essential to this book without it the book would be comp 1 dimensional and would get old fast af
