Comments of chapter undefined of First Demonic Dragon
First Demonic Dragon
AnathaShesha
Chapter comments14
Dude, everyone makes mistakes (me especially) but the "mistakes" you made obviously aren't big enough to make us stop reading your novel, so don't beat yourself up over them
AnathaShesha:I made a lot of mistakes that feel hard to move past sometimes tbh
its funny sweet with the right amount of action and seeing the family and life he built for himself it gives the rest of us hope that it could happen to us to lol (maybe thats just me) but regardless its a great read and cant wait for more especially excited for ericas turn hopefully in your next chapter been waiting for a long time now
Dude, to me this novel is one among the best. it is not always seriousness and suspense. Sometimes it is just a dumb day for an op character, sometimes a sad one, sometimes a fight one. But all in all, abbadon stayed consistent throughout the novels. Sure there may be some things that could have done better. But it doesnt impact the novel as a whole. If LOTM and Reverend Insanity is S tier, this one is A. Keep up the good work author, Someday you will reach the pinnacle of writing and also, watching you creating this novel inspired me to start my own. I am casually writing it but hopefully someday if i make it big, i will make a shoutout to you ! Though by that time you will already be among the s class hehe
