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Comments of chapter undefined of First Demonic Dragon

MyghtXD
MyghtXDLv15MyghtXD

I mean I love this story and all but I can’t stand just having more and more of them thrown in for whatever reason. I can barely remember the names of Abbadons wives anymore because they all have the such similar personalities now and I can’t tell them apart

cody_dedmon90
cody_dedmon90Lv15cody_dedmon90

ummm idk i dont dislike the idea, but with the personality you've given yara, idk if it would make sense in the story to have a development like that

Gavin_McRoberts
Gavin_McRobertsLv15Gavin_McRoberts

I’m normally all for that kind of stuff but I honestly don’t think it would work with how you’ve written asmodeus and yara to be. Especially with the comment in early chapters about how she killed all of his previous lovers and he thought she was the most attractive like that

Lewis_Cooper_9575
Lewis_Cooper_9575Lv15Lewis_Cooper_9575

nahhh Asmodeus and yara are too solidified atp

Curtis_Page
Curtis_PageLv15Curtis_Page

Nah he just needs yara

Anubesetesh
AnubeseteshLv15Anubesetesh

if it's Etica it'd be understandable becYara knows her and Erica knows Asmodeus from way back. other than than I font think it'd work as others have said due yo how Yara is written.

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_FreeseLv14Dakota_Freese

I'm just gonna say it I love this story the father son banter and everything that goes with that family is awesome. I hope this story goes on for a lot longer but I wonder how the rest of the wives abaddon has will become God's as well or his mother or daughters!

SpeedDemon266
SpeedDemon266Lv15SpeedDemon266

nope for asmodeus. Erica belongs to abbadon for the person that mentioned that.

Mark_McCoy
Mark_McCoyLv15Mark_McCoy

Not to sure about that. Tara killed all the other women. She needs to have a change of attitude maybe after she becomes a god or something

Villagain
VillagainLv15Villagain

I don't think it would make any sense at this point especially with how Yara and asmodeus have been written I couldn't really see her being ok with that especially Erica since they've know each other for a long time and she never seemed to have like any feelings for asmodeus only abbaddon I feel like giving asmodeus another wife would seem pretty forced at this point

Sil3nt_1
Sil3nt_1Lv15Sil3nt_1

Na I think Yaras personality at this point simply will bot allow as it would go against everything we know about her mindset when it comes to her relationship with her husband

aaaninja
aaaninjaLv15aaaninja

I think it would be a fun idea and concept. However, it would have to be someone even Yara respects to get past the personality quirks. I think it has potential.

Tom_Breitenborn
Tom_BreitenbornLv15Tom_Breitenborn

nope