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Comments of chapter undefined of First Demonic Dragon

blank111644
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still iffy on tia joining the crew. I viewed her as more of a sister than a love intrest however I am more curious on how u will continue the story than to criticize your story just because of this detail . love the story keep it up

Gavin_McRoberts
Gavin_McRobertsLv15Gavin_McRoberts

IT FINALLY HAPPENED!!! (Also I think you did a very good job introducing her into the harem and the way it happened made sense, to me at least. I think going the route of the wives doing a “test” and getting their approval was the best way to introduce her without forcing it)

Phillip_Watlington
Phillip_WatlingtonLv15Phillip_Watlington

perfect. how's my boy apophis doing. can't wait to see how he handles his little problem

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IcewaterKat
IcewaterKatLv15IcewaterKat

Oh my goodness..... That was so full of love, care and passion that it made my heart almost explode. I'm still trying to calm down.

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Pandaz_Juju
Pandaz_JujuLv14Pandaz_Juju

you my good sir. Have magnificenty added the final piece to the puzzle. Well done Author you deserve a cookie. THE MOST GRANDEST OF COOKIES just make sure to hide it from Mira

Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv15Joethedeath

oooh a test... :D that makes it a possibility for future additions via this test lol

Willbc
WillbcLv14Willbc

This is a perfect way to add her it was just what was needed and her arc will be legendary

TheSDH90
TheSDH90Lv15TheSDH90

I mean, I'm sure some people are mad, but that doesn't matter. just create a story you enjoy writing and we'll enjoy reading it. if you force yourself to add something that you don't want to or don't think fits in the story it will end up being painfully obvious and will make the story worse. this was a great chapter, and I can't wait to read more in the future.

SankokuraXD
SankokuraXDLv14SankokuraXD

I was one of the readers that didn't really want Tita to join (for the same reasons she laid out to Thea and Apophis), but the test and having a period of engagement before she can actually be one of the wives is a smart way to handle it. I'm interested to see how this all turns out.

ruined_sky
ruined_skyLv15ruined_sky

see this is how you add a love interest!

Lewis_Cooper_9575
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Tom_Breitenborn
Tom_BreitenbornLv15Tom_Breitenborn

amazing finally Tatianna has joined

Anubesetesh
AnubeseteshLv15Anubesetesh

naw man ya did good!

aaaninja
aaaninjaLv15aaaninja

nah... good chapter

Sil3nt_1
Sil3nt_1Lv15Sil3nt_1

Thanks for another great chapter brother!! Finally Tita joins the fam!! I'm happy