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Comments of chapter undefined of First Demonic Dragon

LittleIndian
LittleIndianLv13LittleIndian

So personally I would like the maid to become a wife. But if you are only thinking about adding another wife because of his children/origin parts. Then you don't really have to since you have added a loop hole without realising it. Since Tartarus is a place instead of a creature, even if it is a sentient place. You can have it take the form of a sentient weapon, or a spirit like entity in Abaddon that stores the excess powers of his other origin parts. Then explain it with how they are different from there (siblings). For example, it can store the excess powers perfectly because it is/was the prison for the powerful monsters/beings made by the gods, and its sibling Typhon.

aaaninja
aaaninjaLv15aaaninja

I am down for another wife. As long as it goes with your story and makes sense, I am all for it. Tell your story that makes sense to you, and so far, no real complaints.

Sil3nt_1
Sil3nt_1Lv15Sil3nt_1

The more, the better, is what I say! Add the maid, the Phoenix, the angel, and his commander. There are 4 prime grade wives ready for the picking brotha.

Benjamin_Green
Benjamin_GreenLv15Benjamin_Green

story progression is great, I honestly think you can swing 2 more. the triplet and Erica I don't think anyone will be mad seeing both of them join the family

ProximaPhoenix95
ProximaPhoenix95Lv15ProximaPhoenix95

@AnathaShesha In my opinion, Tita is locked by what Abbadon promised her earlier. However, the Phoenix Queen (name blanking rn) is ranked high to be a wife... my suggestion is either Tita and the Phoenix Queen become his wives, or in a really cool/chaotic twist, have Tita and the Phoenix Queen merge/combine into one intity to spice things up and close both romantic interests at once...

Lewis_Cooper_9575
Lewis_Cooper_9575Lv15Lewis_Cooper_9575

it's your choice personally I think that as long as you don't go past 10 it should be doable and I know you said tita would be the next but for some reason it just don't sit right but as I said we'll read it regardless of your choice

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Mark_McCoy
Mark_McCoyLv15Mark_McCoy

The triplet sounds fine if you have to

Finbeani
FinbeaniLv15Finbeani

just let the first wife have twins or something like that?

Gavin_McRoberts
Gavin_McRobertsLv15Gavin_McRoberts

Look author I don’t want to be that guy. But didn’t you in an earlier chapter have Abaddon tell Tita that if he got another wife it would be her? Which I’ve already said my piece before on whether I want her added or not so I won’t bring that up

IcewaterKat
IcewaterKatLv15IcewaterKat

I can't wait to meet the new wife. With the way you write, she will be loved by the characters & the readers.

Visionaari
VisionaariLv15Visionaari

Its a harem novel go get them new wives

Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv15Joethedeath

yo i hate to be THAT guy, but we all already voted and the majority was WELL in favor for tita at least, and im sure it would be the same for erica, if you need to add more wives ADD THEM, there is literally NOTHING WRONG with adding more wives as long as its organic and goes with the story, as long as he dont start collecting them like pokemon, nothing is wrong.

DirtyBeast
DirtyBeastLv15DirtyBeast

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LokiXavier
LokiXavierLv15LokiXavier

You’re a talented author if in your story you feel like you need to make a decision make the decision you want to see and let it fall how it may. We will read it regardless.

Phillip_Watlington
Phillip_WatlingtonLv15Phillip_Watlington

I say go for it. Do want you need. I also would like to ask is abbadon capable of making children that weren't previously born of his fragments. Cause if so I say add two wives and let us see what a true hybrid can do vs his other children.

Corodix
CorodixLv15Corodix

Twins, or letting a wife give birth a second time, would resolve it. No need for an extra wife just for that. Story wise it also feels somewhat off to be add another wife at this point, now that they've hunkered down and all that. Unless it's perhaps someone he meets in a future trip, like a godess or other divine entity? But even then I don't think there's any need for another wife, the current group pretty much provides everything you need.

ruined_sky
ruined_skyLv15ruined_sky

the story is already greatbecause you dont force things. its not like he would pick a random woman anyways. if anything it should be his wives telling him to add another because she has done somethinf worthy for them. a supreme goddess thats imprisoned in the gods realm and helps him would def be a cool idea

Anubesetesh
AnubeseteshLv15Anubesetesh

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Anubesetesh
AnubeseteshLv15Anubesetesh

I knew this would happen. since you started with Gabrielle being born i knew we'd have to add another or more......I can deal with it if it is needed. you're good enough to bring in another and still have everything flow so I'm not opposed.

Walter_Williams_2337
Walter_Williams_2337Lv15Walter_Williams_2337

Do it!!!!