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Comments of chapter undefined of First Demonic Dragon

Daoist8hXYho
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

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Nickjr321
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Thanks for the chap

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Heisenberg4k
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awesome chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Goncalo0110
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Will he share with is Wives and mother that he can see The evolution path and conditions to evolve of other people?

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FallenAngeI
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Thanks for the chapter. I need more

Khors
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👍

crimsonoverlord
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super chapter in vera the up of it's woman? is the chapter how much is it per day[img=recommend][img=recommend]

HeavenlyAzureLotus
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I quite enjoyed the first 39 chapters. I like that the woman have a personaility. Evolution is a fun idea too, I was looking forward to him growing and learning. Last couple chapters were pretty cringe, I think your story was fine and didn’t need random godly intervention or him to randomly act all cocky and transform outta nowhere, magically become one punch man and act like an edge lord teen, also it was kinda wierd his past self was out here calling him weak and pushing him to move forward and not give up when he was a fat loser lol, if dude had that kinda grind he wouldn’t have been a “fat loser” on earth lol. Hope to see the story go more toward fun interactions and cool abilities ane fun adventures and previous personaility instead of it going the random godly intervention, random past self hallucinations and Mr cocky cool personality flips.

PhantomKing629
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Thx for the chap