AnathaShesha
I quite enjoyed the first 39 chapters. I like that the woman have a personaility. Evolution is a fun idea too, I was looking forward to him growing and learning. Last couple chapters were pretty cringe, I think your story was fine and didnât need random godly intervention or him to randomly act all cocky and transform outta nowhere, magically become one punch man and act like an edge lord teen, also it was kinda wierd his past self was out here calling him weak and pushing him to move forward and not give up when he was a fat loser lol, if dude had that kinda grind he wouldnât have been a âfat loserâ on earth lol. Hope to see the story go more toward fun interactions and cool abilities ane fun adventures and previous personaility instead of it going the random godly intervention, random past self hallucinations and Mr cocky cool personality flips.