Cursed_Warlock
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Some scenes are cut short and could use more of a description, some paragraphs would be better if they were separated into smaller chunks. The fighting scenes were good, experiment with different styles and see what works for you.
Hope you guys enjoyed the chapter, chapter 2 should be releasing soon!
Hello! Valk here, co-owner/co-writer of Co1, hope you enjoy our passion project!
Palaestra: A training ground type of area where the ancient greece army members used to train
Nice chapter, looking forward to chapter 2!
