DesMark
Fúćk man you said you were going to cut a part of the simulation but I think this chapter was too much, it took me a while to understand that he entered a simulation you went from a normal dialogue to an explanation of what happened in the simulation and jumped straight to explain another one, you don't have to create a bible for each simulation but not even a paragraph of him entering one or preparing for what to do during the simulation is too fast, I got lost in the chapter everything happened so fast. You've come from a simulation of 5 chapters to 2 simulations in a 3 or 4 paragraph it gets weird.