Comments of chapter undefined of Starting the Multiverse journey from SAO

Pace seems fine to me. You're writing the planning phases before actual canon, which so far hasn't required much exposition. Training arcs, unless done really well, tend to be boring. Informing what he has trained without taking chapters to convey that his poker face has improved seems silly. Keep up the good work.

it is going well, waiting for the interaction with suguha kirigaya, which will be interesting and with "Sinonn" it would be better not to go through that traumatic situation and get to know her and train her and be like "rika". Imagine having a sniper that is 100% accurate, it would be epic.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter.

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