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Max is still using the first armor he obtained in the beginning, do you have an armor you plan on using next
Love the story fam, its pretty interesting, and im giving ya my powerstones. Now that being said, i think it lacks dialog. Most of this chapter (not all of them) was ”go there, did that, done this” what it needs above all else is dialong between mc and Melina. You didnt have to add Melina as a follower, but you did. She feels like a lvl 3 Pidgey from pokemon, you just gave FLY to get from point A to B. If she is gonna be there the hole journey then she needs for dept. This is my critique and opinion, so take it or leave it here to rot like Caelid.