Comments of chapter undefined of Elden Ring: Transmigration

Love the story fam, its pretty interesting, and im giving ya my powerstones. Now that being said, i think it lacks dialog. Most of this chapter (not all of them) was ”go there, did that, done this” what it needs above all else is dialong between mc and Melina. You didnt have to add Melina as a follower, but you did. She feels like a lvl 3 Pidgey from pokemon, you just gave FLY to get from point A to B. If she is gonna be there the hole journey then she needs for dept. This is my critique and opinion, so take it or leave it here to rot like Caelid.

Best chapter so far Good job

More chapters pls 🥹

Some bosses drop incantations how will he get them ask them ? maybe a quest ? LANSSEAX gave vyke a red lightning incantation so ?

you should do stories based off dark souls 1-3 and bloodborne, maybe even sekiro. all with the same amount of realism, the realism is why i love this so much

Thanks for the chapter