Comments of chapter undefined of Elden Ring: Transmigration

This is good but so far I feel as if the story has been like a summary. A way to fix this would be to instead of saying an interaction between characters happened, you could give the dialogue. Another way would be to include some POVs from other characters but not to much. Also while I understand he needs to get useful items, he should start doing quests and meeting waifus. #1 waifu is Millicent, she goes from a dying and sickly person to a person who achieved thier goal and lived thier life with a bittersweet end. You gotta fix her ending, just feed her like 999 preserving boluses. For Millicent her relationship to Malenia would be nice to hear, perhaps mother and daughter. We could even get Oyakodan. Just some food for thought.

Good chapter

bloodborne quick step was just more fun than the iconic roll imo