Chestnutriceeee
So... I'm stopping right here. The story isn't bad per see, it's on the beginning still and there's potential to this. The characters are not bad, the writing is pretty good and the fight was really well-written, the flow is ok, etc. My problem is with the MC, I don't know if the author is going for an overbearing type of guy or just plain cold and calculating and I have no problems with characters like that, it's just that so far, the MC feels way too artificial, he doesn't feel "human" so you don't care about him at all and reading a novel where you are not attached to the main character is usually a waste of time so I'm stopping here. 5/10.