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I am the son of dragon

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iusyLv1iusy

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JamalZouhirLv1JamalZouhir

great start

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ArmyNavy8598Lv13ArmyNavy8598

Typical grammatical issues in translation. Very slow to start. MC is to blasé about what's happening (lacks excitement, fear, or astonishment).

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Martian_falconLv1Martian_falcon

good

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The_BtataLv1The_Btata

It is normal for the main character's feelings to be surprised or afraid when he finds that he has reincarnated. This reaction is not convincing for me as a reader. It is better to amend the chapter and add more feelings.

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