Comments of chapter undefined of Champions of Andartha (An Elden Ring inspired VRMMO LitRPG Story)

I'll post the next chapter this weekend after I finish proofreading and editing it. Though if you'd like, you could also read this novel at scribblehub and royalroad. I have some kind hearted people help me proofread there so the chapters would in those sites would be better written than here. Also if you could rate my and follow my work there, it would help me a lot in my motivation to write = faster chapters. Again, thanks for reading my work!