Comments of chapter undefined of Champions of Andartha (An Elden Ring inspired VRMMO LitRPG Story)

The story is fun so far. The details in writing makes it really immersive to read. It's really well written so far author! The only piece of advice I have is during the chapters where the pov switched to the friends watching the game to say who's pov it is. It took me a bit to realize whose perspective those chapters were in.