Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

i can see how much effort for this chapter

CSI: Konoha Things that I didn't expect to read on a Naruto Fanfic...

author you did it again. this is too much information. even if it makes sense for all this to be discussed. It is often better to simplify things to avoid making unnecessary exposition that the readers don’t need to know. People often think that more detail means better but too much detail will make your story too slow. setting things that you want to happen in a chapter can help or make the problem worse. but you could have definitely fit interogations, or at least one that is important to follow the investigation. Because all that we got from this chapter was that now takuma is an asistant in a murder investigation of a woman, and that 6 people where in the scene.

I hope that Takuma is able to get the Byakugan of Mukai Kohinata for himself & then use it to increase his prowess.

Thanks for the chapter

Gracias por el capítulo