Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

This chapter was so much better from Jurou's perspective, I now know I usually get tired when reading this, the MC is just so boring that my mind is bothered in reading anymore, with Jurou there are so many interesting things, such as information on the orphan system, information on mc parents, what they would do if he failed and such, this chapter answered many questions the mc would never in another 50.

This was a Great chapter. Most fanfics or the anime never focused on this aspect, but it makes sense, that village will keep an eye on everyone.

I dont know why I cant post a review. I tried many things but I can't get it to work. So instead I'll be posting the review here World building -√√√√√ 5 Writing quality -√√√√√ 5 Character -√√√×× 3 Posting stability -√√√√√ 5 whatever is in this section -√√√√√ 5 overall rating 4.6 While some would say that this is great overall, I would say not really. Don't get me wrong though, I have read AMJ and I am not disappointed. With this though, I can say that you took your skills from AMJ and improved it and gave the world of shinobi, a much more realistic outlook on an orphans life, unlike others that just want to get things done and dropped. Just like what my stars indicate, the character can do a bit more... imagination. Right as it is, it's like having Quinn West transmigrated and changed his name to Takuma, just without money, talent, someone to do and fetch things for him, and family. It is the same problem with them fearing the future (which is not bad, but only in moderation), having insecurities (again, only in moderation), and hiding their pain with a smile. Those are my only concerns really. Aside from that. You literally built the world as if you are personally there. Lots of interesting takes and concepts, and much more unforgiving for Takuma.

Was the best chapter so far for me.

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Beautiful world-building, it seems to fill in the gaps that Kishimoto left, it always seemed strange to me to give apartments to orphans and leave them unsupervised, someone has to teach them how to cook, the value of money, household chores and supervise how they are living with home visits

I thank you for the chapter.

boring so far

why

It was boring at the start but I started to like it I like average MCs not op please keep up the good work 🤍💐

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

it was good, but i hope author won't use others pov too often

Thanks for the chapter!

Merci pour le chapitre !

thanks for the chapter

Thanks