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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

FictionOnlyReader
FictionOnlyReaderAuthorFictionOnlyReader

For some reason, my comments arent getting through. I posted this on this chapter. See attached.

ReadsforFun
ReadsforFunLv15ReadsforFun

this story is depressing

LootofMoney
LootofMoneyLv5LootofMoney

I expect action or strategic story what I get slice of life and depression

Mirio_kun
Mirio_kunLv1Mirio_kun

F**k I am leaving. I will come after 10 chapters. If things stays the same...

ElderDragon25
ElderDragon25Lv4ElderDragon25

Not gonna lie the first old man person I thought of was Iroh

edu_rodeiro
edu_rodeiroLv15edu_rodeiro

tbh this is completely depressing to read, no matter how well written and super fluid it is. it's just dark, but in a bad way, make my brain want to just go read something else. still a very talented author, hope others like this, not my thing tho

danty
dantyLv4danty

Also why the Mc so far behind? He has all the motor skills and intuition necessary for physical exercises. Which means that even before incarnation he should've been bottom at class, so teachers shouldn't even be surprised. Academic subjects like history I'd expect him to catch up in a single day

danty
dantyLv4danty

It does feel unnecessarily angsty. MC age portrayal is all over the place, one instance she's thinking like a young adult next thing he has emotional intelligence of a 6 year old. Shouldn't he have asked for extra help from the teacher? That is the whole point of being a student no?

Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1Thehighesthol1

why is mc in such a hurry to practice taijutsu? why not cultivate chakra first and use his brain to deal with it.

Blake_Langton
Blake_LangtonLv15Blake_Langton

This MC Disgusts me

Fostr
FostrLv13Fostr

That's a good idea for a new character 👍This chapter is showing you how deep the author research in this story of Naruto.

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

Izar_Fernandez
Izar_FernandezLv1Izar_Fernandez

Thanks for chapter

Chad_Curtin
Chad_CurtinLv13Chad_Curtin

Final got a bit of help even though it’s a pathetic amount honestly saved me from dropping this wouldn’t be able to continue reading about this kid being depressed yet not even trying to properly improve any longer

Olbap300
Olbap300Lv3Olbap300

Personally i like how Is going, keep with the great job(Is borring to read people thet already know everything)

Ink_LORD
Ink_LORDLv4Ink_LORD

headbutt the log. maybe you'll get better. or die. either works.

rimuru_sensei
rimuru_senseiLv1rimuru_sensei

DĂ­ganme q tiene una habilidad trampa por q sino lo dejo

EvilPenguin_666
EvilPenguin_666Lv4EvilPenguin_666

Zhang_Kai_Rui
Zhang_Kai_RuiLv15Zhang_Kai_Rui

I would be curious to know how old he's was before he Reincarnated, and he should no cause it says he remembers his previous life. If he was an adult then his critical thinking and problem solving skills should be MUCH higher than they are. When a kid just charges at you, you step out of the way and trip them as they go by. Forward thinking is something he should already have that separated him from the kids around him. He would need to be 12-16 when he died for this to make any sense.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.