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Comments of chapter undefined of Path of Desire [Moved]

josesintora
josesintoraLv6josesintora

nothing happens brother

Ahren
AhrenAuthorAhren

Also please reread previous chapters as I had done some editing I felt was better, as something’s later on might feel came out of nowhere!

Depeirak
DepeirakLv4Depeirak

I think you are doing better than other similar stories i read so don't sweat it as long as you dont break the reverse plot for anime clichés or stereotypes.

Herohero
HeroheroLv3Herohero

Thank you for the chapter but I hope that he starts his training soon (at 10 old no 12)