GnomeBob
All I can imagine is someone using Vander Decken’s mark fruit with the nen ability to either make hilariously large or sharp objects (to get things to throw) OR to make extra or extended hands (to actually mark the enemy), imagine tossing infinite boulders at somebody from anywhere in the world
Maybe the slow slow fruit, and using his nen to make it an aura type of ability that slows what he wants at will? Use those multiple thought processes he is working on. You don’t have to be the fastest swordsman is everyone else is slow. lol Ps. This fruit is a bit confusing. It slows things, right? Even things in motion, right? So why doesn’t the slowed target fly off into the distance or into space? The planet is moving and rotating. The solar system is moving. The galaxy is moving. So why does it work like this? If only your hand gets slowed would you be stuck to it or could you pull it along? If you target air, could you make if feel like breathing or walking in molasses? Or maybe if you target someone’s organs like the heart or brain? How much does it slow by? And more…
Honestly I'm still a bit iffy on the devil fruit for the mc... the powers are insane but being weak to all water?(sea water? Im not sure tbh) it's a very damning weakness. I am interested at what nen ability he will have. I think something like gojos infinity would be really cool and would fit in with the mc having multiple independent minds which would give him insane multiplication processingin his mind. Plus the force would heavily aid him in it as a type of guid and bridge. It also fits with his powerset. I also Can't wait until he goes to the one piece world, then he can really live up to his name "swordsman"
hey I do have a question is this going to be harem ? or is the mc the roaming ronin type(those guys get all the girls for some reason), not a deal breaker for me but you are one of the few authors who can actually write a harem so I was curious, or maybe he will get one girl in each world, can a harem even work on this setting?
first things first great chapter thanks. now for some reason I am stuck thinking of the nagi nagi no mi(most useless devil fruit) and it's combination with nen, you could create one of those zennie nen abilities and just create something to the effect that if I can't hear an attack it can't hit me and bam absolute defense.