Comments of chapter undefined of Bringing the game items to real world

Bringing the game items to real world

thelightedghost

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Alien_Space_BatLv5Alien_Space_Bat

I really think romance is not doing well in this story......this Cathrin is like a cardboard character......fast paced is not even the term since it just took a paragraph to see the end of it.

1yr

thelightedghostAuthorthelightedghost

That's the best i can do to initiate romance. She will be a long standing character for better or worse

1yr

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Joemeister19Lv6Joemeister19

I was waiting for the follow up with the CIA but then you just have to include bad attempt at inserting romance. Timing was kinda off. anyways, thanks for the chapter.

1yr