Comments of chapter undefined of House of Dragon: The Quiet Dragon of House Targaryen

You should really read back what you have written. The words don’t flow and there are a lot mistakes

Author why is Mc coming back he could just build his fortune or even a city over in essos there is no benefit he gets by coming back to swear to viserys. Almost every fanfic has the mc coming back just to participate in all the drama

it has started feeling like a translation

Great chapter

Thanks for chapter

great story so far. I love whatever direction you choose bro and love the development. while somewhat predictable still very enjoyable enough so that I have to keep reading and just can't stop. thank you!

Moooooooooooorrrrreeee

Great chapter man

Se parece a deamon blackfyre

Daemon is the younger brother