Comments of chapter undefined of I'm The Villain? I will Live As I Want

Thank you for your advice I will try to improve myself.[img=recommend] And about Lucifer's parents don't worry they will get what they deserves

that definitely felt unsatisfying(the parents got off too easy). the main thing you can improve in the short term is your writing style. this is different from grammar. you can introduce titles or new skills and their descriptions in different kind of parenthesis. the scene change could also use something like page break. this helps tremendously.

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thanks for the chapter but it's too short

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Thank you for the chapter and take care of your health .