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Comments of chapter undefined of Lord of the Mysteries - Fate Emperor

sindbad
sindbadLv4sindbad

Thx

Mobius_5trip
Mobius_5tripLv4Mobius_5trip

no, it wasn't too rushed, he has a major cheat, it will be weird if he didn't

KenTheSlayer
KenTheSlayerLv4KenTheSlayer

The only criticism I would have is that there is a severe lack of anything in his life apart from this potion progression that we can see. I mean, some character interaction would benefit this ff a lot. It might be a bit boring but it will some personality to the MC. Also I like the fast pace so far and I understand why you are doing it the way you are doing it.

LordOzzy
LordOzzyLv4LordOzzy

Thanks for the chapter!

Mohd_Ibrahim_8250
Mohd_Ibrahim_8250Lv2Mohd_Ibrahim_8250

i like it

Krypton71
Krypton71Lv12Krypton71

The potions and such for lower sequences can easily materialise from the system. But the higher sequences are occupied so I think an explanation for the system Obtainingthem may be required (e.g system is able to displace the item etc etc or it just guides MC to the item rather than hands it to him)

FatherOfHumanity
FatherOfHumanityLv5FatherOfHumanity

thanks for the chapter

LittleVamp
LittleVampLv4LittleVamp

Thanks

Rayan_Ch
Rayan_ChLv2Rayan_Ch

Thanks for the chapter

TenSamurai
TenSamuraiLv5TenSamurai