Comments of chapter undefined of MHA: Gomu-Gomu no mi

you guys are so simple.... just add Garp as Luffy's grandfather and retired hero and let his quirk be Haki and he teach the MC so you could say he has 2 quirk, 😑 you guys are so dumb how will he learn something that he doesn't even know how to start training, in the anime we only had the introduction of the 3 haki but not how to practice them, just by small cuts of Rayleigh teaching Luffy. It's just a cliche story that Garp's son and his wife died and Luffy ended up going to the orphanage and Garp only found out about his existence after the U.A. school festival....

And for God's sake don't be generic love interest, momo, nejire, Mei is boring 99% of mha's fanfics here on the webnovel it's always the same thing it seems that people have no creativity, there are so many good girls like Mina, Kinoko , Camie, kodai, reiko, itsuka and Toru. Regarding how to get money, the MC can create songs more if the mc's musical talent is the same as the original Luffy's then there's no salvation he'll starve 🤣🤣🤣🤣, Uta's songs her from movie Red are very amazing especially the song Tot.

Personally, i prefer main characters who are orphans and if you add one piece characters into this fanfic, i hope you dont add too many like maybe add 2 or 3 characters and maybe add a romantic interest for the mc like maybe mina, momo, or another character you prefer

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dont be like the guy who was doing a generator rex fic and for some reason added fate servants into it

Guys, here's the thing though, I get haki and all of that, but Luffy can nullify blunt attacks without haki, does this mean he can only get tickled by All Might?

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Add them make your own story that isnt bound by the original people tend to forget that its fanfoction so it can go in any direction

Thanks for the Chapter

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Do it! Do it!Do it!Do it!Do it!