Comments of chapter undefined of Stains of Red

As the beginning of the novel, the chapter is quite normal, maybe a little short, with insufficient information, about what we can expect from the story. But I suppose that's okay anyway, as it's still too early to draw any conclusions.

I like the start it set the stage but doesn’t give to much away and encourages reads who want to know to keep reading. Good job.

Good chapter!

Seeing this chapter I feel ashamed of the first chapter that I wrote. I don't know how to describe the places and expression of the mc like you described. All I have in my novel is info dump, I think.

so far so good

Hello I'm Avron and well you're a new author well so am i would love it if we got to know each other you seem to be growing and i want us to become friends and grow together I have a novel called rise of a star and I want to see If you'll read it and give me some feedback and good start to your first chapter