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Comments of chapter undefined of One piece : Celestial Rose

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Mr_Cuak
Mr_CuakLv3Mr_Cuak

Been a while , one question though will he follow the original path without a df or will you include a df? By the way Welcomeee backk Authorrr!!!

Sea_Light
Sea_LightLv1Sea_Light

Bruh seriously? That will be typical and boring. The only way to make OP fanfic better is to create your own DF

Mr_Cuak:Yami yami no mi

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Melitia_Snek
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Very good. But I would recommend using 'thinking' when the MC is talking to himself. "Talking" is mostly used for talking. It will make it easier to read.

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BlackIight
BlackIightLv13BlackIight

Been a while, but it definitely feels like your writing has improved. I personally don’t think you needed to restart but I’m looking forward to it nonetheless.

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The_Tube
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Thanks for the chapter and can't wait for the future chapters with the new info from the manga

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Beliart3006
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txy_
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thx for chapter

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DIMIE_21
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Mr_Cuak
Mr_CuakLv3Mr_Cuak

Perona as single femalee leaddd

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Leylin_Farlier99
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TFTC man.

guilherme99gc
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[img=gift][img=recommend] Thank you for the chapter ⭐⭐⭐⭐☁️ [img=recommend][img=gift].

Natanael486
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Thanks for the chapter