VeraMera
The plote is very nice.
I will keep on reading because I like it.
As a first chapter, I find it interesting and the story is quite capable to hook a reader to read more....great read
Looks interesting. I can't wait to see what's next.
Very cool, not bombarding me with substance from the very beginning. Great intro into your world.
Nice chapter
The prologue is amazing. Nice world building too
