Comments of chapter undefined of Nana's Journey
Nana's Journey
Immortal_Orca
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Thanks for the chapter! Great again! I found the “lost…” thing funny! :) A large amount of stuff was revealed in this chapter, mostly the latter half. :0 Honestly I could care less about the reincarnated guy, do whatever you want! I feel he could be used as a good plot device, and judging from his personal thoughts, she didn’t exist in his previous life so he might get a mid-life crisis. lol Plus, I think it is the word “reincarnated” that makes them upset, so if it makes you feel better, think of it as the guy had a vision of a future without Nana. No need to get upset. lol
As much as I would like to present myself as someone capable to thinking that far ahead in terms of plot, alot of the things that may look to be connected to past events are actually lucky coincidences lining up on my side since I have a tendency to completely forget what I've previously written unless it's stuck in my mind for some reason. At the moment I don't have any concrete plans regarding the Knights of Radiance other than them being a big part of Abaddon's motivation, however, the idea of having them being connected with Roland's kingdom either directly or by proxy is awesome. Do you mind if I incorporate your idea into the story? (If I still remember by the time it becomes relevant that is.) On a side note, I totally plan on having Nana and Trogal meeting each other eventually.
ManasCiel:SPOILERS!!!!! DO NOT READ!!!!! (maybe?) Last chance to not read it. So be it, continue at your own personal risk! I just went back to the prologue out of curiosity to see if the ones attacking Trogal (the tower mage in the prologue) were the “Knights of Radiance”, because if they were it might explain the reincarnators existence (the group didn’t get name dropped, just where they came from…). From what I could put together, Trogal managed to not only send her to another world but also back in time based on what that goddess thing said about no one being able to do that currently and doubting it would happen in the future, meaning it hasn’t happened in the past either. So, Trogal might still be alive, and if that is the case I want to see an interaction between Nana and him, I imagine it would start somethings like: Nana smells a familiar scent from someone she passed in a town, and immediately starts to attempt smelling them to make sure, gets confronted on what she is doing and her response would be “why smell like, blanket?”(or something like that), and since Trogal can see through lies or false facades he would know she was being honest and curious, and this would spark his own curiosity. Sorry if this spoiles a big reveal. If the author reads this and comments confirming my guess, or just saying something like perhaps or maybe, I will delete this so it won’t spoil it for more.image
