There are few thing I wanted to point out. Firstly, you need to differentiate the 'his' and 'he's' cause these two brought different in meanings, I hope that make sense. Secondly, idk if this was on purpose but it seems like you forgot the letter 'h' in 'as' e.g. 'he barely (h)as time for Ava...'
The chapter needs more usage of commas, and I think I noticed at least one spelling error. Those who dream of starting big businesses, they'll find it interesting.
You got my attention with this chapter for sure,but just like the person who commented first you need to be able to make some specifications. keep up the good work.
