Comments of chapter undefined of Mushoku Tensei: Moving Forward

He shouldnt forgive lilia it doesnt matter if he doesnt take revenge but he should not forgive her

That was disappointing. The MC went on a whole rant several times about changing things and it ended like this? I still hope they end up together because Paul is trash who deserves to die.

Coming back a day later and checking the reviews, I can safely say that you author, officially fumbled the bag. the fic is getting downvoted like crazy as you expected, you got 2 options that might, and I say every so slighty ‘might’ save the novel. which is A.Completely scrap the previous 2 chapters and redo them (we all know you won’t do that) or B.Close off and officially end the relationship of Both Rudeus and Lilia. (This seems like the one where it makes the most sense, she seemed accepting of what Paul did which is equally scummy and I doubt the readers would want them to get back after what happened) In all honesty, you shouldnt have made Romance a driving point for Rudues so early on, the age in different between both of them is gigantic.

It is now that Hitogame appears hahahaaha

I am about to cry reading this the pain in love

Haha he was cheated on.The author has strange fetishes.

please give spoiler what's gonna happen with them going forward and I really hope there is no NTR with other characters like Eris Roxy or other potential harem members

Please continue, just ignore what everybody writes. I know it's hard to read through everything but hopefully it will get better. I just can't stop, I check if there's a chapter every morning. There's not alot of Mushoku Tensei fanfiction.

Trash fic

Ngl slightly disappointed, with the conclusion of this chapter it seems too close to the original.

Trash NTR

The Comment section:

To be honest I’m ok if we get lilia or not idc want to know if we get back at Paul with zenith and to see if we change the story more plus make things more interesting author keep up the good work with this story don’t worry about what everyone is saying you do you also do give a warning for the sensitive people here keep up the good work and can’t wait to see what happens next in story don’t drop it don’t see alot of mushoko tensie

I know this is trash. Alas I loath myself too much.

Author is clearly delusional about what is and isn’t NTR and even with so much backlash his mindset is the same. Can you imagine you think you’re in the right when everyone else says you’re wrong. At that point you have to atleast think over your actions. And the thing about these types is that since it has already happened it’s very likely to happen again.

am i the only one who think this is setup for oyakodon ???

Author, do not pay attention to people who hate the story just because there was "NTR", I and other people like your story, make the story as you see fit and move on.

this fiction is cursed I hate the author. you all were saying age difference common in that world 15 years is the age you can marry. by that time lilia would not be too old

well that was a development