amazing book, there are a few flaws but those will be polished out in time as you are writing the book. I have read many books where in the beginning the writer has less experience but in time perfects their craft. keep up the good work!
I really enjoy your Story this far and the Progression and all the choices the lead took keep Up the good Work and I Like that you dont disclose how its going to end but still drop some hints what could happen with the Continental Teleportation or the cult ;) sorry 4 Bad spelling
A solid book gives enough information with the repeating of things already said. I don't know if you stopped writing but I'm looking forward to more chapters.
i loved the story as it is not simply about getting strong and rich without effort, but seizing opportunities and putting in a lot of effort to plan and win fights to have a huge return. congratulations