AngelAsphodel
while I find the story interesting, I am always lost in all the constant explanations about the characters' strengths and weaknesses. It's like I'm am studying about the nature of the characters, and the focus for entertainment gained from storytelling is lost. Author, you are not teaching but telling a story, so enjoy it and losen up a little. I want to emphasize that; I love, love your story so far.
Oof, that hits close to home. No offence taken though as I genuinely really appreciate the feedback. I know that I was trying to lay a foundation back in the earlier chapters so I know my own reasoning, but hearing feedback like this makes me want to try and find alternative ways to do it without being quite so educational about it. I think it's my own more analytical nature peeking through, so it's something I definitely need to learn and adapt. Hopefully, when I finally get around to rewrites for the earlier chapters, I can keep this in mind and try to make things feel a bit more fun and natural. Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you're enjoying so far :D
After reading through all the current chapters in the better half of 2 days, I gotta say, for a self-proclaimed inexperienced writer, you certainly are a talented one. Being able to write that much in such a short amount of time isn’t something I could even dream of being able to do. Thats not even getting to the quality of your writing, your knowledge and use of words in this novel is certainly of the best I have seen on Webnovel. On top of that, the creativity and complexity with the characters and the plot along with the magic system has me intrigued on what is to come in later stages of this novel! This is 100% one of the best works on Webnovel that I have seen, which is around 200 novels! You can certainly expect a 5-star review from me and a few powerstones along the way.