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Comments of chapter undefined of DxD: Brimstone

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Eltoxico69
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Thank you very much for the recommendation, I will read it for sure, I also thank you for this announcement, I was beginning to have suspicions about you dropping it, and about the power Stones I apologize ... after several months giving power Stones every day became a habit, something like brushing your teeth when you wake up, the only times I have not given Stones is when there is no Internet in my home, So don't feel guilty, nowadays your fic is the only thing in my library that deserves power Stones.

Mr_Cuak
Mr_CuakLv3Mr_Cuak

Love the way you extend the chapter from 20 to 43 , i tried the same but it`s really difficult

Mr_Cuak
Mr_CuakLv3Mr_Cuak

Now that i have read the chapter more carefully i will put my suggestions here : - Author what about make ioann can recieve the inheritance be it physical / spiritual / both from a saint like tomas the great inquisitor and templar? ( Kind of like Van Helsing inherit his trait) Or kind of ioann discovers his grave and all the teachings and things belonging to him and take all - What about Ioann gain like ( Finn from Adventure time) a psiquic arm? - If not the previous option , what about replacing his hand with the hand of glory? Hand of Glory, a disembodied pickled hand of a man who was hanged alive. Said to have the power to unlock any door and, if a candle was placed within made from some body part of the same person, would freeze in place anyone who it was given to. (European folklore) - Or it would be soo cool like having his arms with vines , kind of Finn from adventure time sword arm , but instead of grass kind of like vines ( Like Hendrikson from Hellsing), it would be interesting as a vine arm and the hand of glory as a hand that combination could be excellent. If Ioann has this he is basically a herectic crussader as he utilice the vines of Christ and the hand of other religions and a crussader as he does this in the name of Christ to demostrate that all religions originate from the Christian and he fights for the lord. Another thing to add to this is that only the choosen one could do this as he is the only one god can agree to do this plan. - Also another thing that it could work and Ioann can have a power up ( Small but usefull) is that he can drink the blood of Jesus or eat a piece of his meat to basically him produce Holy energy - It would be interesting to see Ioann hunting other religions ( Armors , weapons , artifacts , etc) to use it himself , that way you have more arcs as well as Ioann has more power. - It would be interesting to see a companion of Ioann ( Kind of like an animal ) and what more perfect animal than a white pidgeon ( Kind of like hattori from one piece)