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Comments of chapter undefined of DxD: Brimstone

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Eltoxico69
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It's not bad, only that your 1st pov is very good, and I agree that an ancient being must communicate in a unique way, in dxd there are very old beings who speak like children of 15, if you can improve something that is wrong why not do it?

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Mr_Cuak
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Author this is more of an idea of mine but as you know a certain part of the DxD lore is about the power of faith and as long as you believe is possible then it is So parting from that i believe that the MC is the choosen one as his faith generate that twist in destiny What does it mean? It means that the mc have : + Chances to encounter magical objects ( weapon , jewels , etc) + More enemies + Destiny abilities have no effect on him as well as predictions + More potential and powers

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TheOneTrueFBI
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Not bad enjoyable even but your 1st pov is amazing and much better cool thing to try out every once and a while though

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Mc sacred gear V6:

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Mc sacred gear V4:

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Mc sacred gear V3:

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Mc sacred gear V2:

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Mc sacred gear V1:

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Author three things : - First sorry to bombard you with all the paralelism and the suggestion of Leviathan and Ziz - Two i wanted to know what motivates you to write this novel as this kind of writing and genre is extremely rare more if it has religious themes - Third what do you think about Ziz , the new armors and forms and the beast as well as the reasoning behind that?

Mr_Cuak
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Abilities of the Mc if Ziz is the trapped beast inside the sacred gear : - Holy light manipulation - Golden shield - Golden staff - Twin blades - Time stop ( God seeing the dragons , he fell into a deep thought , What if the weilder of the true longinus is a madman? So with that thought in mind he decided to grant this ability to its creation as he is the most loyal among the three to the point of being a fanatic ( like the mc ) and violate some concepts of the bible to protect christianity and men , so god gave this ability to him) - Magic enchatment ( he can multiply the user magic potency) - Holy flames / Holy Ether manipulation - Sun empowerment -Speech power up ( The mc can recite the bible and this does much more damage to the devils as Ziz is the ruler of the sky as well as god creations with the capabilities of Absorbing the sun and Holy energy)

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Mc and ZIZ:

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Here is a better Look

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Balance breaker Golden Sky Ruler:

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All of Mc forms (juggernaut drive) :

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Mc juggernaut drive V2:

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Mc + his sacred gear balance breaker state :

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Mc new Armor Balance Breaker (Ziz):

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Mc chant ( Juggernaut drive) : I, who am about to awaken, Am the Heavenly Bird who was bestowed the principles of Protection from God I laugh at the "infinite", and i spit over the "dream" I shall become the Summe Rex avium And I shall Take you to the infinite of the Black space!

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Mc new Armor V3: