Comments of chapter undefined of The Editor Gets A Second Chance
The Editor Gets A Second Chance
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If you don't know how to do something and you have a lot of money, you hire someone to do it for you. The story is good, but the main character doesn't help the story. The protagonist seems like a skittish child and not a grown man with 2 lives.
to me he just seems like a regular person. idk, he might have two lives, but its not like he is omnipotent, nor is he some genius. Thats just the way i wrote him. Im trying to more realistic with how someone would act. Unless i write him as someone completely OP, its gonna be hard to show how competent he is. ill try to work on the progression of the story some more.
THE MONEY PIT ( JAMES HARPER 'S) DOLLARS WOES! Whilst we caught up with our James on his financial services and more surprise investments in 1982's era and on new his half built household facilities and living expenses at the moment, including dealing with I.R.S. taxes payoff. As the rest of his box office earnings trickling down in his money pit void at the moment. Meantime, James Harper preparing for his somewhat next surprising new mystery script to get back into the grind to shock the movie goers audience alongside being a surefire box office smash hit in 1980's era in the Hollywood industry arena as heads in side his new home, and stabilizing his own investment business, and personal life to fallback in the raging 80's era at the moment. We'll see how it goes next time for our hottest director James Harper and his new pre Hollywood famous actress of the week for his somewhat latest movie film IP at the meantime. The Editor" Catching Fire " Catch ya later Cheers!
