Comments of chapter undefined of Cyberpunk System in the DC Universe

I was honestly enjoying the story I thought it had a lot of potential but I really didn't understand why the mc revealed that he has a system that's a lot of stupidity if you think a little after he's no longer useful to the league they'll probably kill the mc since it doesn't make sense you let someone with that kind of power stay alive since it's very dangerous I really think that of all the options the author had this was one of the worst but this one is just my opinion I wish the author good luck with the story

Another story ruined by the author 🥲

I'm not going to lie to you, the MC is stupid? Why would she reveal her trap? What's the basis? He could have just told her that it's a power she was born with that allows her to self modify her body or something similar, it wasn't absolutely necessary to tell her and it's reckless because she's a killer, cunning and manipulative that once she gets all she can from him, he's useless and a potential danger, but above all things he enhanced her, he literally gave her one of the greatest cybernetic enhancements to her, are you seriously telling me that? It's just so stupid to just tell her about his power and now also give her access to the one thing that makes him special, honestly disappointing in my opinion.

I don't understand, did Jason mention the system to talia? Or did he say he made it all up?

I did not like how open he was about cyberware sure it’s a boon but you kinda just screwed yourself over and while I understand this is a fanfic really you go to talia Al ghou and you give her technology that make her inhuman reflexes a higher advantage and it’ not like cyborg levels of tech we are talking about half a century or more ahead and you just ”trust” your teacher to not backstabb you after having everything at hand and presenting it to her like you are her lapdog?

And you ruined it, telling her about the system is like a Cardinal rule that you don’t break

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thanks

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

E o autor simplesmente estragou a fic.

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter