Comments of chapter undefined of Primordial 'Dual Cultivator' Dragon With System

also for your audio readers, don't put numerous equals or minus signs, when you hear a lot of them cos author thinks a new paragraph is not enough, it gives us listeners an anneurism.I had to stop listening to some books cos some authors love putting signs.

gracias por el capitulo

the pace of this version is in my opinion much better than the first version. I think the fact that volume 2 is focusing on their conflict is going to make it seem to have more action since so far he has yet to have any conflict

the story pace is great itnot rushed and flows nice. he is a lot more decisive and not as soft as the first. he is growing and better than the first, the women in the first was just to many to fast no connection the rate of women is slower and the relationship is not rushed as before. looking forward to volume 2 and glad he is going to train and master skills. he really needs it. thanks for your hard work bro on this novel loving it, cheers!

Really need to polish his techniques coz he's just a strong cultivator who cant 💯 utilize his powers 🤷‍♂️.. Also, there's should be a martial arts proficiency or weapon mastery in the shop right?? 🤔 He badly need a good training arc or skip

The current pace you're going at is really just perfect tbh, MC is alot more decisive which is really nice and FMCs ngl most of the FMCs feel alot better in term of their personality + character development!

This first volume was written very well, excited to see what’s in store next

I am LOVING this book so far and hope to see more of it

Do any of his woman’s that he help become cultivators trains their powers and fight

I like this one more than other two novels due the fact that he is not adding women too fast and he really look like he is someone who just started cultivation well i say a lot of things happen in very few days like he became cultivator and meet his sis and all other things happen are in less the a month plus he have little to no knowledge about cultivation so in next part please give some info about cultivation world and how cruel the world is for weak. don't do time difference like other novel it gets confusing don't add to many women in harem but let them be his cultivation partners

remember not to add the whole Feng clan this time 😂😂😂😂

pace was decent for vol 1...you don't have to show daily stuff and just continue the story..not D1,D7 etc...let's the days flow and don't show like everyday. My honest opinion you can increase the pace by 15-20% of vol 2 by the basis of vol 1

Shouldn't Ruxue not have any impurities anymore. I feel like at this point in her cultivation it should only slightly improve her appearance and body. Plus shes a phoenix and not many other beasts or other species match how beautiful they are.